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Re: Story Time
« Reply #45 on: June 15, 2009, 03:59:19 AM »
A mysterious person comes out of the shadows. Randy looks closely at the person, but only can see his eyes. The person's eyes are red with three black tomoes making like a triangle. "Where's Gina? she was supposed to come back to my gym," Randy asked. "Your questions will be answered, but take a look at the screen." Everyone turned their attentions to a screen that came out of nowhere. Beofre their shocking eyes, Gina was chained up along side mkygod, naruto and jen. "What have you done to them?" Kim asked. "Inside of them lies a power so dangerous, they can destory the world. And I need that power to fulfill my master plan!" Kim furious rushes at the man; she throws a punch, but she was punching nothing but air. They looked around and found the person floating in mid air and said to them...
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #46 on: June 15, 2009, 02:39:48 PM »
Flash of light releases the group. To their amazement it was Gina's father Glenn. "Don't worry guys, he didn't actually drained their power. He's using genjutsu." "AH! The legendary Glenn Carano. We meet at last!" Glenn stared at the man with hate and anger. "I can't be controlled by your sharingan Kane, there's no use of trying." "Like I was going to! Well you may have seen through my spell... But how will Randy, Kim and you will save these four people?" Glenn didn't say anything. Kane reveals his face, a battle scar crosses his face; probably the battle he and Glenn had nine years ago. Kane lunged at Glenn; but he was too fast for him as he side stepped. Kane turns out to be a shadow clone as he disappears in a puff of smoke. How can he control a shadow clone from another dimension? Glenn thought. "Randy, Kim... We need to train, Kane has become powerful since I last fought him. The rest of Xtreme Couture can't help, only us." Glenn leaves to Randy and Kim ready for a battle that might be their last. Randy and Kim...
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #47 on: June 15, 2009, 05:05:52 PM »
OFF TOPIC: I'm enjoying these entries by Bas and Naruto, so I'll just step aside for a while.  ;D
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #48 on: June 15, 2009, 09:32:00 PM »
I was gonna post something, but i don't think i'd be able to match Naruto's so well.
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #49 on: June 15, 2009, 09:45:35 PM »
Yeah you truly are a creative person.
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #50 on: June 15, 2009, 09:50:39 PM »
Thanks Dante and to the people who thanked me for my creative story. Really, I'm trying to become a graphic novel writer. So I'll continue:

Both decided to train along side Glenn. They met up with him in the outskirts of Vegas, far enough away from the city. "Got everything you need?" he asked. Both nodded their head showing their belongings. "Good... Now stand back." Glenn unrolled a scroll that had strange symbols on them, he spoke in a toung that Randy and Kim haven't heard. In front of them a portal appeared as if someone broke a glass window, revealing a wormhole. Glenn stepped in, which was weird that when he touched the wormhole it rippled like a water in a lake, soon he disappeared within the portal. Kim and Randy were not sure of the sight they're seeing. They looked at each other and were about to have second thoughts. Kim took a deep breath and ran towards the wormhole, "KIM WAIT!!!" Randy yelled after her, but she was all ready gone. Randy wasn't sure about this. He has never gone through anything like this for his entire life, at first he had to travel in the future, but nothing like this. "Ok, Randy... Don't be a chicken, Kim just ran towards it and probably have made it through the other side," Randy said out loud. Without hesitation Randy ran towards the wormhole... TO BE CONTINUED!!!
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #51 on: June 15, 2009, 09:52:38 PM »
Well i think you'll be excellent at it.
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #52 on: June 16, 2009, 01:24:34 PM »
Randy thought about the wormhole. What if I come out all... wrong or something? The thought of him turning into a disgusting beast or a glob just scared him a little. Wait a minute! I'm Randy The Natrual Couture! "I'M COMING KIM!!!" He ran as Dante yelled, "RUN RANDY RUN!!!" Randy, very confused on how he arrived here, trips on his own feet and, "SH--" and enters the wormhole.

Meanwhile... Kane walks up to the camotose Gina, Naruto, Mkygod and Jen. But to his amazement Naruto awakes. Naruto looks around the unfamiliar surroundings and notices Gina, Mkygod and Jen. "What the hell is this?" Naruto said out loud. "You're in the alternate universe of your world!" Naruto notices Kane. "Michael Jackson!" "I'M NOT MICHAEL!!!" "You kind a look like him." "I'm not." There was a long pause. "Hey" "What?" "Do 'chamon'" "NO!" "Ok, jesus." Kane walks up to Gina and begins to touch her. "Hey! Now that's wrong man! Leave her alone." "I can't help it! She's so beautiful!" "She doesn't want to be with you Michael," Kane so angry at Naruto runs up to him and punches him in the face. "AH! Right in the face!"

Randy in the mean time is falling in a long, long, long wormhole... I wonder what time it is?
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #53 on: June 16, 2009, 02:25:37 PM »
Agreed, very attention grabbing!
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #54 on: June 16, 2009, 02:54:56 PM »
We should change the name of the topic to "Naruto's Story Time"
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #55 on: June 17, 2009, 02:50:44 PM »
It seemed like forever. Randy started to to get bored from the "free-falling" as he seemed to call it. There's a 84 story building. At the 82nd floor there's a bar. Two men are at the bar enjoying some beers, one is having Coors Light and the other is have a Bud. The man drinking the Bud turns to the Coors guy and says 'hey there's supposed to be wind out that blows you back into the bar.' Coors guys doesn't believe this, 'that's physically impossible,' 'no! it's true.' Coors guy doesn't say anything. 'Look I bet you twenty that i jump out of that window and if I don't back in, the twenty is yours.' Coors guy starts to think. Hmm, if I win then I can buy another round of beers! 'Ok.' Bud guy lays the twenty and gets ready. 'Oh boy! I hope there's a wind tonight.' The guy runs and jumps out the window. Minutes went by and the Coors guy starts to get worried. 'Oh sh**! I killed him!' To the guys very eyes the Bud guy comes back into the bar! 'Whoo! That was fun!' The guy can't believe his eyes! 'IT'S TRUE!!!' Coors guy runs and jumps out the window. Well... Instead of coming back in he hits the ground splat. The bartender sees the whole damn thing and turns to Bud guy, 'That was uncall for! You're drunk Superman!' Randy laughs to himself until, "HOLLY CRAP!!!"

Meanwhile... Kane walks around the now ruined city of New York. The city seems to be destroyed by a nuclear blast as there are no one around to see. He walks up to the Empire State Building and enters as two gaurds lets him in. He goes to the 74th floor and is met by two slaves; weak looking but strong enough to stand and walk. He pushes them aside and walks up to a figure looking at the dead city; which was an erie sight to see as buildings are standing with parts ripped off of them. Kane bows, "Lady Sinn! I have brought the four people you requested." "Good... Where are they?" "They're chained up outside of the Stanley Hotel." The figure turns and began to walk towards Kane. A light seeping in reveals... to... be... Santos. TO BE CONTINUED.....
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #56 on: June 18, 2009, 05:10:42 PM »
The ground came so fast, Randy lands with a loud THUD! Kim helps him up as Randy was behaving very strangely, "That's right Cleveland you're listening to the hits, it's 12:45 pm lunch hour now here is The All American Rejects with Gives You Hell." Randy lands back to the ground out cold. Glenn helps out as they set him on a huge rock with a flat surface on it. Waiting for him to awake Kim looks up at the sky. It was a strange sight to see. She was able to see galaxies and a comet with it's beautiful blue tail streaking through space as a rocket. But not only it's the strange night sky, but Kim can feel pure energy flowing through her. "I can feel energy!" Glenn putting away the scroll he used to open the wormhole turns to Kim, "What you are feeling is chakra energy." "Chakra! Why does that sound so familiar?" "A fansy way of saying, 'energy' the 'force'." Kim can really feel the chakra flowing through out her body; it's so smoothing she can stay here forever, without any interuptions. "We can't stay here for too long. Monsters and beasts are likely to wake up." Kim went to help Glenn as she heard a waking call from an unknown source. She carried Randy by the feet, Glenn the head. They managed to make to a temple; which it took like three hours to arrive; but Kim wasn't worried from the tiredness that over took her, she was marveling the massive temple that stood before them. The gate leading to the temple opens with a 'clanking' noise. A woman comes out and it's Gina's mother Dana. "Dana!" Kim surprised. "Hey, Kim. I see Randy knocked himself out." TO BE CONTINUED...
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #57 on: June 19, 2009, 02:28:00 PM »
Santos started to look at the papers of Gina, Naruto, Mkygod and Jen. She took Naruto's last and started to read his status. Her eyes widened as she read what was his power and called out for Kane. Kane came through her office door and stood in front of her desk. "Why didn't you tell me that this man has the power of Nine-Tails?" Kane looked confused and Santos noticed it. "So that's why he came to!" "Yes indeed. You see, at first people in Japan didn't believe that Nine-Tails was real... Until now." Kane watched as Santos walked to her bookshelf and pulled out a really old book labeled Legend of the Tailed Beasts. "This book contains information of all nine tailed beasts." "Nine! Ah! The Nine!" "Yes... Gina's friend Naruto is one of those nine." "Then I'll transfer his power into you!" "NO!" Kane lowered his head in an apology. "He has to be last. If I have his power first I'll die. Gina's power needs to be transfer before him and then I'll be able to to have Naruto's power."

Kim couldn't believe her eyes. Dana, Gina's mother, here! "Dana! W-what're you doing here?" Kim asked her. "Well, to help you train of course silly." Dana walked to Randy and laid her hand on top of his head. Randy started to come to, as he started to rub his head from the bad fall he had taken four hours early. He looked around and saw Glenn and Dana. He then noticed the sky above him. "Where are we?" "You're in the Orion Zone. Powerful people come here to train," Dana said. She smiled at Glenn and walked back to the temple. "All right, let's get to our rooms and we'll start training tomorrow." As they began to walks towards the inside of the temple, Kim heard a rustleing noise behind her. She noticed two blue glowing eyes and a low growl from the bush in front of her. It, without any hesitaion, charged right at her... TO BE CONTINUED
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #58 on: June 20, 2009, 03:42:00 PM »
Kim prepared herself as the shadow revealed itself to be, Bastiaan. "Bas! What're you doing here?" Kim a little confused. "Training of course! What? You think I came here to just watch you guys," Bastiaan picking up his satchel. He walked by Kim and Randy and pat Glenn shoulder as he continued to walk towards the temple. "Why is he doing here Glenn?" "I'll explain to you during dinner. Now come on." Glenn continued to walk followed by Kim and Randy. The gate behind them closed with a CLANG. Kim looked up and noticed that the sky above them was like earth. Just a second ago the sky was space and now the sky you wake up every morning. "What I'm about to tell you guys, concerns my daughter, her friends Naruto, Mkygod, Jen and Bastiaan," Glenn told them. Randy and Kim looked at each other with concerned for Gina and her friends, as they entered through the doors of the temple.

Naruto woke up again from the punch her took earlier and began to look around again. It felt a little chilly but it didn't bother him. He looked to his right and saw Gina still asleep and then looked to the left seeing Mkygod and Jen are the same. Naruto released a little energy to Gina. She began to come to and she notices Naruto, Mkygod and Jen. "Naruto?! Thank god you're ok! W-where are we?" "I don't know, but I don't like what they're going to do with us," Naruto turns to Mkygod and Jen releasing some energy to them as well. They awoke and notices Naruto and Gina. "Whoa! Did we have some freaky party last night?" Mkygod asked. Gina and Naruto shook their heads. Naruto with all his strength freed himself from the chains and helped Gina, Mkygod and Jen. He then stood their with a blank look on his face. "What's wrong?" Jen asked. She turned and had the same look on her face. Gina and Mkygod turned and notices where they are. "The Stanley Hotel!" Gina said in surprise. TO BE C0NTINUED.
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Re: Story Time
« Reply #59 on: June 21, 2009, 02:32:39 PM »
"THEY'RE ESCAPING!!!" the four turned to see four guards running towards them. Gina can see six more guards headed their way as well. "Ten are coming," she said, "You guys run, I'll handle these guys," Jen said. The three ran as Jen prepared herself for a fight. The first guard swung his sword, but misses as jen dodges it; she punches the guard in the chest making him fly twenty yards as the ground explodes from the impact he made. The two other guard fired their weapons at her; She put her hands up as a bubble surrounded her; bullets were bouncing right off the bubble she summoned. She then releases a telekenitec power as three guards flew back into the others making a domino effect. Later she caught with the others inside the Hotel. The air was foul with something. "We can't stay here for long. More guards are coming," Mkygod sensing their energy. Naruto walked forward, Gina behind him. There was a pause, But Gina walked in front of Naruto and had a surprise look on her face. "I know that look!" Jen and Mkygod looked at Naruto and notices the look as well. "He's got a plan," both said.

Meanwhile... Bastiaan joined Glenn, Dana, Kim and Randy at the dinner table; pizza was surved. Bastiaan took a piece as he listened to Glenn. "Have you heard a story about the tailed beasts?" "What the monsters from the sci-fi show?" "They're real Randy. Just you need to have the power to travel through other worlds." "The legend is fore told that nine creatures were created from large amounts of energy. The tails indicate how powerful they are, eight and nine being the most powerful creatures ever; but nine tails is the most." Kim swallowed and asked Glenn, "What has this got to do with Gina?" "I don't know... But it's not about Gina... It's Naruto and Bastiaan." Kim and Randy looked at Bastiaan and thought about Naruto. Glenn continued, "Kane is pawn of a piticular person... Santos." Randy and Kim looked at Glenn in shock. TO BE CONTINUED
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